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posted April 19th, 2013, 11:30 am


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April 19th, 2013, 7:59 am

WarWithin

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Happy friday everyone! So Nate and Brock have finally been introduced. It seems like Nate's finally going to get that much needed training!

Big day at work for me, a much needed promotion may happen! Wish me luck!

Feel free to leave a comment! I appreciate any and all feedback!

Thanks and enjoy!
-WW

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April 19th, 2013, 12:13 pm

Felix Wind

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Good luck with the promotion!
Another great issue. I anticipate the next.


EDIT: A bit of critique; I have to go back and double-check on this, but with Brock in terms of expression, maybe you could've etched on raised eyebrows or given him a grin or smile or something of the sort.

In terms of mouths, so long as the sprite is increased in size, may not be a bad idea to add on from time to time. Gives the character more emotion whereas Brock here looks a bit bland. (Though a Leader, no less! :D)

(I personally prefer no mouths myself, so I'm not saying do this with everyone - but seeing as Brock can't make many expressions with his eyes I made this speculation)

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April 19th, 2013, 3:37 pm

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@Felix Wind: Thanks for the feedback! I totally understand what you're saying about Brock. I remember back when I actually spirited these pages having difficulties displaying his emotions with the lack of actual eyes. Hell I even tried to give him eyes but he looked to weird and unnatural haha. But I played with it a bit in the upcoming pages, you'll see.

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April 19th, 2013, 4:19 pm

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In terms of emotion and criticism, I must say I'm kind of disappointed with Brock here. Everyone else has had some kind of unique expression and emotion, but Brock... here, his responses just seem bland and generic.

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April 19th, 2013, 5:50 pm

WarWithin

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SIDE NOTE: IT SEEMS LIKE I KNOW WHAT TO DO TO GET PEOPLE TO COMMENT NOW HAHA

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April 19th, 2013, 7:56 pm

Felix Wind

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Anytime. I'll keep a lookout for anything else, and I can't wait to see future pages. Lmao.

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April 20th, 2013, 6:52 pm

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Is it me, or do you seem to not get all of my corrections, considering "advantage" is still spelled incorrectly.

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April 21st, 2013, 10:09 am

WarWithin

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@Petah-Petah: The only correction I missed was one comma, however in your corrections you never pointed out advantage was missing the a. It's not the end of the world.

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August 3rd, 2013, 12:56 pm

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its not about type advantages; its about ur trust in ur pokemon! -Red

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